Very Nice Short Story
"Release Me" was a great way to spend an evening. It's an exciting short story with a lot of intrigue and action as well a very sweet romance between two handsome men. They'll melt your heart when you read about them. They're sexy even though there isn't much sex in the story. There is only the smallest amount of detail, and the rest is just implied, but it's hot nonetheless. I liked everything about this one. The characters are well fleshed out, even for the length of the story. The background characters are good too. The cops are all cool, and Nicholas' Mom is too cute. The ending is very satisfying. Everything tied up neatly. The only thing I'd complain about is that it IS short. I would have loved to have had it be quite a bit longer. It would go from great to thoroughly outstanding with another 30,000 words. **hint hint, Iyana** Hehe.