Long and Short Reviews
Dale had made a big mistake with Mandy and was determined to not just make it up to her, but cement their relationship and make her his. But Mandy isn’t an average woman, she can’t be bought with flowers or chocolates and very quickly Dale realizes he needs to prove himself to Mandy or risk losing her forever. I enjoyed this fun and sexy short story. I found the interactions between Mandy and Dale spicy and exciting. In particular, I liked watching the large, powerful biker learn the hard way that sometimes something really worthwhile needed time, effort and some deeper thought. While I completely understood where Mandy was coming from – what woman wants to risk having her heart broken a second time by the same man? – I did feel that she was a little harsh on Dale. I can appreciate there wouldn’t have been much of a story had they actually sat down and talked rationally about their thoughts, expectations and feelings surrounding their newly begun romance, but to a degree the conflict between them felt rather blown all out of proportion to my mind. I loved the chemistry between Dale and Mandy and felt they were well suited. I found myself believing both in their attraction to each other and the potential long-term aspect of their future together. With plenty of deliciously explicit sex, some raunchy dirty talk and enough heat to burn the place down I feel there’s plenty in this short story to appeal to readers who enjoy a sensual and spicy hot read. An enjoyable, quick and sexy read.
