I enjoyed this story
I enjoyed this story. I thought it was funny and had good drama elements.The story flowed naturally. It was contained in a very specific manner which isn't bad, its similar to a scene in a movie. While I think there was enough of a set up - there could have been more done. My only issue was that I paid $3.99 for six chapters and an epilogue. As enjoyable as it was, I felt cheated. It's a great start to a series or whatever the writer intends but ... I would want more than what was given, especially with how well it was written. Overall, what was written was good. :)